ood idea to let the students feel them by reading some poems. It’s also mended that students write some poems of their own.РI hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful and wish you ess!РYours,РLi HuaР【解析】这是一篇半开放式作文。题目要求你给你的美国朋友Tom写一封回信,针对Tom提出的请求,给他提两条建议。文章应注意以下几点:1. 该回信是给Tom提建议,故语气应该比较委婉,客气。2. 所提建议应该和如何举行以“Chinese poetry”为主题的活动有关。所提建议可以涉及活动举行的形式,内容等方面。Р【亮点说明】所给范文内容充实,就Tom的请求提出了四条建议,每条建议都非常具体实用。范文长短句结合,灵活运用了各种句式。例如:1. 宾语从句I’m so glad to hear that you are planning to hold activities about Chinese poetry. 2. 定语从句you’d better introduce the history of Chinese poetry which dates from ancient times briefly. 3. 主语从句It’s also mended that students write some poems of their own. 4. 被动语态It’s also mended… 5. 短语:take…for example; dates from。此外,to begin with, Then, Eventually, also等词的使用使得文章条理清楚,衔接流畅自然。
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