zation, punctuation)Р(2). Key points Р(3). Suitable words and expressionsР(4).Grammar (tense, voice, sentence structures)Р (5). Logical problems (conjunctions, orders)Р3. Get each group to mend one or two passages and share it with the rest of the class. And the teacher chooses one or two of them to mark them in class with the help of overhead projector and gives ments.)Р4. Ask the students to make necessary changes in their writing and copy them in their exercise book for further correction.Р(点评:同伴评价实际上是合作学习的一种形式,其重要理论基础就是考卡夫(Kafka, K)最早提出的“群体动力理论”(group dynamics)。通过组内讨论交流,小组评选,学生对自己所写作文的要求与要点以及注意事项都有了大体的印象。老师再利用实物投影仪选择不同层次代表性的文章当堂点评。对于学生作文中比较容易出现的问题,应讨论出合理化建议并加以纠正,比如时态错误。如果他们能在写作中出现比较深层次的认识,教师应该及时加以表扬,从而培养了学生的写作热情,提高评价和欣赏文章的水平。)РHomework:Р找出自己一次外出游玩的系列照片,制成小册子,配以英语说明,说明中需增加自己的点评,然后向全班展示。