bly.【问题分析】:这篇文章最大的问题是出现了太多的语言问题。如主谓一致:Differentpeoplehasdifferentopinion.名词单复数问题,语态问题:Insomeplacestherearenothingthatcannotbuywithmoney,等等。【精彩例文】:CanMoneyBuyHappiness?Canmoneybuyhappiness?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somethinkyes,whileothersholdtheopposite.Itistruethatwithenoughmoneyonecanbuyallthethingsonewants,fortandsecurity.However,itisequallytruethatlackofmoneycausesgreatdistress.monviewthat"moneyistherootofallevil."Thepursuitofmoneydrivesmanypeopletocheatandsteal.Insomeplacesthereisnothingthatcannotbeboughtwithmoney,resultingincorruptsocietieswhereeverybodyismiserable.So,moneydoesnotnecessarilymeanhappiness.Italldependsonhowitisused.Ifwemakehonestandsensibleuseofmoney,itcanbeastepping-ohappinesslAlthoughmoneycannotbuyhappiness,itcanmakehappinesspossibleifitisemployedsensibly.
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