: blocked→ blocking或 blocked前加 which; washed前加beenР第九句:去掉more;a→anР书面表达РDear MichaelРI'm glad to know that you are learning Chinese language and culture. In your last e-mail you said that you wanted to know something about my family spirits. РWell, there are many good qualities that have been passed from generation to generation in my family. My parents always lay emphasis on the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me.Р РMy family spirits have a profound influence on me. I’m always friendly to others and am always ready to help others. I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. Owing great thanks to those good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.Р Yours,Р Li Hua