70词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计人总词数。)\r【答案】例文:\rStudentsneedtohaveahealthyschoollife.Whatcanwedotomakeit?HereI'vegotsome\rideastosharewithyou.\rFirst,ifsimportanttokeepourschoolclean.Forexample,wecancleanthedesksandfloor\reveryday,becausegoodenvironmentishelpfultoourstudyandhealth.Second,it'sgoodtodo\rsomesportslikerunning,playingbasketballandsoon.Third,we'dbetterlookafterourselveswell,\rsuchaswashinghandsintimeandwearingmaskswhenitisnecessary.Finally,ifwealwaysgeton\rwellwitheachotherandkeephappy,we'Henjoyahappyandhealthyschoollife.\r【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据图片内容提示讲述学生健康\r校园生活的一些建议。\r2.例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍自学生健\r康校园生活的一些建议分成四点来写,叙述完整且条理清晰。\r3.高分亮点:\r短语:needto;makeit;sharewith;forexample;dosomesports;andsoon:lookafter;suchas;\rgetonwellwith。\r句型:because引导的原因状语从句:it做形式主语的句子;if引导的条件状语从句。
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