专题04 写作专题 云南省2020-2022三年中考英语真题分项汇编（解析版）

oolLife\r【答案】例文:\rMyAfter-schoolLife\rThoughschoollifeisverybusy,mylifeafterschooliscolourfulandenjoyable.\rFirstofall,Ineedtofinishmyhomework,whichisthefirstthingIneedtodo.OnlywhenI\rfinishmyhomework,willIgotoplaywithmyfriendshappily.Playingbadmintonismyfavourite\rsportafterschool.Inmyopinion,sportcontributestomyhealthwhichisimportantindailylife.\rIamsosatisfiedwithmyself,becauseInotonlystudyhard,butalsoenjoymyselfafterschool.\rAsastudent,Ineedtostudy.Atthesametime,Ineedtoenjoymychildhood.\r【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己的课余生\r活及收获。\r2.例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述自己的课\r余生活及收获叙述完整且条理清晰。\r3.高分亮点:\r短语:firstofall;needto;playwith;inmyopinion;contributesto;amsatisfiedwith;atthesame\rtime,\r句型:though引导的让步状语从句;Onlywhen…willI…部分倒装结构;which引导的定语\r从句;because引导的原因状语从句;notonly…butalso…的结构。