egreatprogress.\r【解析】\r【详解】\r1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“Themovingmomentinmylife”为题,介绍生活中让\r自己感动的事情。\r2.写作指导:本文时态以一般过去时为主行文;人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开\r适当的叙述,谈谈发生了哪件事,并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通\r顺,逻辑清晰,无单词语法错误。\r9.例文:\rThefeelingofhappinessisveryimportant.Wearenolongersatisfiedwithonlyenoughfood\randclothes.Instead,weneedhappiness.NowIwillsharesometipstoincreaseoursenseof\rhappiness.\rThefirstisfriendship.Friendscanshareourfeelingsandhelptomakeushappywhenweare\rsad.Theycanprovideuswithhelpwhenweareinneed.Theycanalsokeepuscompanywhenwe\r0页\rarelonely.Thesecondisbeingthankful.Sometimeswecan'tgetwhatwewantandwewillbe\runhappy.Butifwefocusonwhatwealreadyhave,andbethankfultoeverythingaroundus,I\rbelieveourlifewillbealothappier.\rTrytomakesomefriendsandbethankfultoeverything.Iamsurewewillbemuchhappier.\r第10页共10页