ot. One of the new changes is that China, the former ‘bicycle kingdom’, is ing ‘a new nation on the wheels’.Р(1)Р(2)Р(3)РPre-writingРCompetitionРProblems of carsРBenefits ?of bicyclesРNow please try using your correct language to write your beautiful paragraph three in five minutes .? Remember to use the useful expressions, the outline and…РwriteР→РcheckР→РshowРWhile writingР转折РhoweverРinsteadРon the contraryР递进Рwhat’s moreРin additionРwhat’s worseР3.连: 连词成句、连句成篇Р4.美: 语言美、书写美РTipⅠ. Use vivid words or advanced phrasesРTipⅡ. plicated sentence patternsР高级词汇!?亮点句型!РbesidesРon the other handРWhile writingРPost-writingР“检查四路径”?1)审——人称?时态?结构??2)列——主题句?支撑要点?多余语句??3)连——有无适当的适当的过渡句和连词??4) 美——单词正确拼写?大小写和标点规范?? 主谓一致?名词单复数?? 有无高级词汇和亮点句型?? 书写是否认真、干净?Р5.查: 自查修改、互查修改РIndividual and group workРPost-writing
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