lments. On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive use of the\rcards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school\rincapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take\rthem years to pay off.15 分\r50n my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credjt card may\rbring, we couldn't afford to ignore a conspicuous fact: in most cases, parents are our\rsole financial sources. Instead of spending without any restt·ict, we ru·e supposed to\rput studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence\rupon our parents. 10 分\r评分标准\r1 有语法错误 ， 每 处扣 0.5 分\r2 缺 乏逻 辑扣 3 分\r3 连接词每个 1 分，缺少必要的衔接手段，连接词 扣， 3 分；\r4 论证不充分口 4 分；\r5 结 论没有强化主题 扣 5 分
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