高考英语作文倡议书模版

tect the environment. What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you are off it. In this way, you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you are here. Don’t hesitate, everybody. Let’s ride to school.?The Students’ Union?June 13, 2011?【习作点评】?短文较全面地反应了作者的语言组织能力、书面表达能力,以及思维能力。文中注意了上下文的连贯性,能有效地使用语句间的连接成份,使全文结构紧凑;同时文中也运用了较高级的词汇及语言结构,增强了文章的可读性。①Firstly…;Next…;Actually…also…;In this way…让文章浑然一体。②As far as I am concerned就我个人而言;…for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot中for用做并列连词表示“原因”; …no matter how busy the traffic could be 中no matter how引导让步状语从句;What you should do carefully 中what引导主语从句,以上从句的灵活运用,表现作者的语言功底。③省略句while riding以及it做做形式定语,进一步丰富了文章的语言结构。④同时,文中也正确地运用了一些好词汇及短语,如:convenient, practical, appropriate, hesitate等。