possible version:РAll kids want to be good at learning. Howeveve, it’s not easy. In my opinion, those kids who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well. They not only work hard at their subjects but also enjoy playing games. Playing also helps them learn better.РAs to how kids balance learning and playing, the most important thing is to follow the rule—work while you work and play while you play. Moreover, kids should learn to work happily and relax totally.РI’m sure a good balance between learning and playing can make a great contribution to kids’ growth.Р书面表达评分标准:Р第五档:(13—15分) 能写明全部要点， 语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。Р第四档:(10—12分) 能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。Р第三档:(7—9分) 能写明一些要点，语言错误较多，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。Р第二档:(4—6分) 能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。Р 第一档:(1—3分) 只能写出若干单词，无可读句子。
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