n_my_life_is_my_mother. РMy mother is of medium height. She has long straight hair and often wears glasses. She is a kind and nice teacher. She works hard and is always ready to help students. In her free time, she likes reading and traveling. She is also good at making cakes.РLast weekend, my mother and I had a wonderful time. We went to climb a mountain near my home. We talked and sang happily on the way. My mother also told me some interesting stories. I learned a lot from her. What a good kind mother!Р评分档次与标准:Р一档9-10分Р包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的语言运用能力。Р二档7-8分Р基本包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量语言错误。Р[来源:学+科+网Z+X+X+K]Р三档5-6分Р内容包含了多数要点,语言表达过于简单,句子不够通顺,有部分语言错误,基本上不影响总体理解。[来源:学,科,网]Р四档3-4分Р内容包含了部分要点,能写出少量正确句子,但整体表达不连贯,且语言错误较多。Р五档0-2分Р只能写出一些单词,不成句子,缺乏逻辑性,错误很多。
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