various. Bike, car, train, and plane are ing the basic needs of people today. Among these various kinds of transportation, I would prefer bikes.РWhen time is not the first thing to be considered, I always choose bike to go to school. It is not only environmentally friendly but also avoids the more and more heavy traffic in the city now. Besides, riding bike is a kind of efficient practice which is very good to our health. So, here I’d like to appeal for all those possible to ride bike to school or office for our health, for the environment and for the city transportation.Р解题方案:Р评分标准:Р格式5分, 内容15分,分为5档,分、5分、8分、11分及14分;2分……条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。
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